From 052394329bd47010b683439948f7be2786f34a3c Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: Jaysinh Shukla Date: Fri, 24 Nov 2017 20:26:06 +0530 Subject: [PATCH 1/2] [FIX] Improving grammer according to suggestions. --- _posts/2017-11-14-django-girls-bangalore-2017.md | 8 ++++---- 1 file changed, 4 insertions(+), 4 deletions(-) diff --git a/_posts/2017-11-14-django-girls-bangalore-2017.md b/_posts/2017-11-14-django-girls-bangalore-2017.md index 333a6c5..6a2f53a 100644 --- a/_posts/2017-11-14-django-girls-bangalore-2017.md +++ b/_posts/2017-11-14-django-girls-bangalore-2017.md @@ -60,18 +60,18 @@ panel and taught girls about deploying their websites to done by my team. They were able to demonstrate what they did to the world. I was more joyful than them for such achievement. -The closing ceremony turned amusing event for us. 10 copies of [Two scopes of +The closing ceremony turned amusing event for us. 10 copies of [Two scoops of Django](https://www.twoscoopspress.com) book were distributed to the participants chosen by random draw strategy. I solemnly thank the authors of the book and [Pothi.com](https://pothi.com/) for gifting such a nice reference. Participants shared their experiences of the day. Mentors pinpointed helpful -resources to look after. They insisted girls to not satisfy at such point and +resources to look after. They insisted girls would not stop at this point and open their wings by developing websites using skills they learned. T-shirts, stickers and badges were distributed as event swags. You can find the list of all [Django Girls][django_girls] chapters -[here](https://djangogirls.org/events/map/). Djangonauts are shouted to become a -mentor for [Django Girls][django_girls] events in your town. If you are not +[here](https://djangogirls.org/events/map/). Djangonauts are encouraged to become a +mentor for [Django Girls][django_girls] events in your town. If can't finding any in your town, I encourage you to take the responsibility and organize one for your town. If you are already a part of [Django Girls][django_girls] community, Why are you not sharing your experience with From b637327237bcdc3e9a9c8145f93c8de116c527ad Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: Jaysinh Shukla Date: Fri, 24 Nov 2017 20:29:29 +0530 Subject: [PATCH 2/2] [FIX] Broken reference --- _posts/2017-11-14-django-girls-bangalore-2017.md | 6 +++--- 1 file changed, 3 insertions(+), 3 deletions(-) diff --git a/_posts/2017-11-14-django-girls-bangalore-2017.md b/_posts/2017-11-14-django-girls-bangalore-2017.md index 6a2f53a..d7a3391 100644 --- a/_posts/2017-11-14-django-girls-bangalore-2017.md +++ b/_posts/2017-11-14-django-girls-bangalore-2017.md @@ -70,9 +70,9 @@ open their wings by developing websites using skills they learned. T-shirts, stickers and badges were distributed as event swags. You can find the list of all [Django Girls][django_girls] chapters -[here](https://djangogirls.org/events/map/). Djangonauts are encouraged to become a -mentor for [Django Girls][django_girls] events in your town. If can't -finding any in your town, I encourage you to take the responsibility and +[here](https://djangogirls.org/events/map/). Djangonauts are encouraged to +become a mentor for [Django Girls][django_girls] events in your town. If you +can't finding any in your town, I encourage you to take the responsibility and organize one for your town. If you are already a part of [Django Girls][django_girls] community, Why are you not sharing your experience with others?