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Make the download pages about macOS and Windows more readable via some minor edits.
On the Windows download page and macOS download page: Transform the paragraph of items included in the EDB installer into a list for readability. Split a long sentence in two. Trim some wordiness/redundancies. Remove italics around “Advanced users”.
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templates/pages/download/macosx.html

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<h1><span class="text-lowercase">mac</span>OS packages <img class="logo" src="/media/img/apple.png" alt="Apple Logo" /></h1>
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<p>You can get macOS PostgreSQL packages from several different sources.</p>
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<p>You can get macOS PostgreSQL packages from several sources.</p>
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<h2>Interactive installer by EDB</h2>
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<p>
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This installer includes the PostgreSQL server, pgAdmin; a graphical tool for managing and developing
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your databases, and StackBuilder; a package manager that can be used to download and install
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additional PostgreSQL tools and drivers. Stackbuilder includes management,
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integration, migration, replication, geospatial, connectors and other tools.
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This installer includes:
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</p>
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<ul>
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<li>The PostgreSQL server</li>
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<li>pgAdmin, a graphical tool for managing and developing your databases</li>
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<li>StackBuilder, a package manager for downloading and installing
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additional PostgreSQL tools and drivers. Stackbuilder includes management,
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integration, migration, replication, geospatial, connectors and other tools.</li>
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</ul>
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<p>
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This installer can run in graphical, command line, or silent install modes.
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<p>
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The installer is designed to be a straightforward, fast way to get up and running with
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PostgreSQL on macOS, however in the unlikely event that you do have any issues with
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the installers, please report them on the <a href="https://github.com/EnterpriseDB/edb-installers/issues">
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The macOS installer is designed to be a straightforward, fast way to get up and running with
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PostgreSQL. In the unlikely event that you have issues with the installer,
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please report them on the <a href="https://github.com/EnterpriseDB/edb-installers/issues">
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installer Github page</a>. Issues with the installed packages should be reported to the
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appropriate project directly.
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</p>
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<p>
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<em>Advanced users</em> can also download a
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Advanced users can also download a
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<a href="https://www.enterprisedb.com/download-postgresql-binaries">zip archive</a>
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of the binaries, without the installer.
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This download is intended for users who wish to include PostgreSQL as part of another application installer.

templates/pages/download/windows.html

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<a href="mailto:[email protected]">[email protected]</a>.
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<p>This installer includes the PostgreSQL server, pgAdmin; a graphical tool for managing and developing
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your databases, and StackBuilder; a package manager that can be used to download and install
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additional PostgreSQL tools and drivers. Stackbuilder includes management,
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integration, migration, replication, geospatial, connectors and other tools.
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<p>
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This installer includes:
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</p>
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<ul>
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<li>The PostgreSQL server</li>
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<li>pgAdmin, a graphical tool for managing and developing your databases</li>
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<li>StackBuilder, a package manager for downloading and installing
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additional PostgreSQL tools and drivers. Stackbuilder includes management,
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integration, migration, replication, geospatial, connectors and other tools.</li>
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</ul>
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<p>
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This installer can run in graphical or silent install modes.
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</p>
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<p>
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The installer is designed to be a straightforward, fast way to get up and running with
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PostgreSQL on Windows, however in the unlikely event that you do have any issues with
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the installers, please report them on the <a href="https://github.com/EnterpriseDB/edb-installers/issues">
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The Windows installer is designed to be a straightforward, fast way to get up and running with
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PostgreSQL. In the unlikely event that you have issues with the installer,
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please report them on the <a href="https://github.com/EnterpriseDB/edb-installers/issues">
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installer Github page</a>. Issues with the installed packages should be reported to the
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appropriate project directly.
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</p>
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<p>
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<em>Advanced users</em> can also download a
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Advanced users can also download a
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<a href="https://www.enterprisedb.com/download-postgresql-binaries">zip archive</a>
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of the binaries, without the installer.
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This download is intended for users who wish to include PostgreSQL as part of another application installer.

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